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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-06-28 10:56 AM


Touching the face of dreams
and someone
i have yet to meet
grabs me hard
whirls me around
then, kisses me long and unbreakable
i wonder?

i awaken…
smothering zephyrs glow
alternating sounds of rock
lay with me
i reach out, but my bed is empty
empty
empty….

remembering now, the fire
remembering what i believed
wanting, wanting
wanting and yet
nothing
but
teasing emotions
infidelity
lies, infatuated immaturity
perhaps nothing but a notch on
a gun…

and

still waiting
i break, sometimes
like fragile glass
though, no one will see

slow
slow hours

obvious
loss of focus
stimulating need
i weaken
knees shaking from want to believe

my muse drives me along a
advocate road

glowing overemphasized
sound and senses
give a loving touch to my nose

a glossary of fading verses
should strive to make some intellect
some present tense, terse implements
i know one can’t go back, but
i scorn passion with remorse
refusing to fall and rise
and fall…or feel the clever teeth
of soreness

i’ve never known any different?

to feel lightning
and the pile of rain….

it is the great noise of corn
crying as it is milled
smashed to fine grain

skimming for writing assignments
one space reinstates my thesis
has winter convinced me?
devoured me?
turned me to ice pieces?

did i staple a sign to the upper left
corner of my forehead?
with steady speaking eyes
“not available”
undermining cosmic syllables
matter of factly
lowering my head in understanding
why? why? why?

i’ve never had anything to compare to..
growling august or the
black and blue worn palms of december
and it’s
mocking birds of cutting words…

and so…

Touching the face of dreams
And someone
I have yet to meet
Grabs me hard
Whirls me around
Then, kisses me long and unbreakable
I wonder?


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Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
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Ca
1 posted 2005-06-28 11:02 AM


This is beautiful....
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-06-28 11:05 AM


why? why? why?

i’ve never had anything to compare to..
growling august or the
black and blue worn palms of december
and it’s
mocking birds of cutting words…

and so…

~*~

rip away...


Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-06-28 11:34 AM


Lee~

My gawd ... this is wonderful~

'someone
i have yet to meet
grabs me hard
whirls me around
then, kisses me long and unbreakable'


Oh ... what anticipation~

You've got MANY killer lines of thought in this one, dear poetess~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2005-06-28 12:27 PM


someone
i have yet to meet
grabs me hard
whirls me around
then, kisses me long and unbreakable

I have had that happen, Lee...maybe it was not all that it seemed

M

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
5 posted 2005-06-28 01:10 PM


What a good poem.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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