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Open Poetry #35

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PazSqual
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 71

0 posted 2005-06-28 10:31 AM

Why’d sadness return
Happiness should dominate
The new beginning

[This message has been edited by PazSqual (06-28-2005 12:51 PM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-06-28 11:06 AM

the only thing that comes to mind, is to echo what Sy says sometimes...things just sometimes happen that way?

Nice write

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

2 posted 2005-06-28 11:15 AM

Well understood....

Very nice.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2005-06-28 12:33 PM

I ask the same questions...but no one answers

M

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-06-28 01:29 PM

PazSqual~

A melancholy Senryu~
Very nicely done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2005-06-28 07:09 PM

All new beginnings bring forth the past...as if to hold dearly what should never be forgotten...happiness.
Well done.
TD

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