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Laying Low |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I process the last few days trying to delete that which never occurred, despite the many wishes for those wishes to come true. I look for that place inside where happiness resides but is laying low wondering what it is about me that is so invisible to the outside world that even the hurt cannot be noticed. And so the mirror lies this morning, my twin smiles to begin her day, you know that Alice, the one who can move between the lines of the mirror and step back when things get too strained. I reach to grab her hand, to feel some touch, and follow her, to watch the world from behind. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this aches M, sending you healing hugs... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, know the feeling up close and personal, just as your poem has made me feel...soft melody, aching heart...and yet, when she grabs your hand and never lets go, it is then...you begin to understand all your questions....hugs to you, and thank you for a very precious write |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Alice couldn't keep a hand on you .... and the Kingdom of Hearts isn't what it outta be! chin up ... and don't fall into any mirrors! - your friend ... the madhatter  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes...we know that Alice...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Gentle Spirit, thank you Donna..if only that would do the trick  LeeJ, well it would be nice if understanding was in the offering but it just isn't there at this time...might never be. Thank you ctowen, Thank you Craig and yes I have come to believe that the Kingdom of Hearts doesn't really exist for me. It must have been that mirror I broke about 4 years or so ago...I still have a few more years of suffering to do, I guess. Thank you "friend". Sunshine ...I try to keep her from resurfacing but it is inevitable right now. Thank you Karilea for reading my "lack of" in words. M |
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