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Sun of faith
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2005-06-27 08:29 PM



You have the privilage of me,
Yet you choose to play with feelings.
This world of mine ean be so firm in your hands,
But you choose to throw it around.

Im of great knowing of what i'd do for you,
Unknowing of what you would ever do for me.
My mind unsure of hom many questions i can take,
Im hopeless in this void with no release.

Im so deep in you I cant escape,
So I pray you let me forever stay.
Im up so high from your existance,
Im so afraid that I will soon fall.

It would be an honour to give you all of me,
And a privilage to take what you want to give me.

© Copyright 2005 Sun of faith - All Rights Reserved
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2005-06-27 09:18 PM


what a cute poem.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

2 posted 2005-06-29 10:20 AM


This was a good read.
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