navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » School
Open Poetry #35
Post A Reply Post New Topic School Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Quad_dune
Junior Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 26
Ontario ,Canada

0 posted 2005-06-27 06:51 PM


        Its like your trapped in your own
flesh not able to express any emotions.
        As if your standing in a dark room centred and alone.
        Your in a chair laying your head on a cold hard surface.
        Your not listing to anything your totally blocked out from the outside world.
        Like there’s a force field around you keeping your mind from absorbing anything  of interest.
        Its like your in your own world where everything sucks, nothing to do, no one to see, no one to talk to.
        Until the only sound that means anything in this world awakes you.
        It’s the bell, it broke, it pierced the
sound barrier  that no longer exists.
        You lift your head off the desk and wait util the next bell.
        Where another world of boredom  will begin.  


© Copyright 2005 Quentin Davidson - All Rights Reserved
skoolyardturtle
Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96

1 posted 2005-06-28 02:52 AM


i like it.  i just graduated so i now how you feel.  I think once it's over you start to miss it though....
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » School

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary