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Where Time Stands Still
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Where Time Stands Still |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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We danced to the music of fallen leaves crackling underneath uncertain feet and the sound of love was oh, so sweet.... Hidden there from all watchful eyes two shadows blending in tones of earth, and only the sky could see us swaying in time with the trees heartbeat music floated on the breeze.... Seasons come and seasons go and also, love although sometimes we never know; the reason, the how the answer.... and why.... oh why, but my heart will be forever dancing where time stands still amidst the memories of autumn skies... I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This was so pretty, especially Seasons come and seasons go and also, love although sometimes we never know; the reason, the how the answer.... and why.... while reading, and I don't know why, I first read, seasons come and reasons go.... but the answers, somehow we'll never know all of them, if any.... Hugs lady, for a very precious write |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
sigh...no we never know, and rarely are even given a bit of insight as to love's traipsings...but with time and pain, and wisdome comes a sort of acceptance and that is what I read in this.........along with an abundance of talent |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
but my heart will be forever dancing where time stands still amidst the memories of autumn skies... What a gentle memory where time stands still while it is again brought to living life...I lost myself in this beautiful poem...*big hugs* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*sobs* this touches my heart so completely... sooo keeping this  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleLittleSpirit~ 'only the sky could see us swaying in time with the trees' I have such a moment that commands time to halt~  This is beautiful~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your muse is being VERY good to you, little one... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You paint such a pretty scene, and then my heart hurts. Ture poetry in this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is simply beautiful m'gentle one, smiling wide. mxx Oh, you speak to me in riddles |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thank you all so very much for your kindness and support. Hugs and peace.I really want to care, |
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