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James_A_Fraser
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0 posted 2005-06-26 08:38 PM




I called
myself
weak

You said
"sensitive"

"vulnerable"

"open"

tears burn
the same

but
don't
hurt


Reposted....for a friend

© Copyright 2005 James A. Fraser - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-06-26 08:55 PM


thanks for the repost
iliana
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3 posted 2005-06-27 12:03 PM


Very deep......library clicked!   ....jo
Tndeer1
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4 posted 2005-06-27 12:46 PM


Simply put yet so beautiful.
God Bless!

Tndeer1

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5 posted 2005-06-27 09:37 AM



Jaime~

*understanding*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-06-27 09:39 AM


to me, there is nothing more attractive then a man who is unafraid to show emotion...and expresses the same...

this was contemplation, and she...is a wise lady...hugs

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7 posted 2005-06-27 09:52 AM


Lee's response was perfect... In a world where macho is too often mistaken for manliness, it takes immense strength to show sensitivity... It's a beautiful heart unafraid to hurt for another. *S*

Superb write!

Cloud 9
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8 posted 2005-06-27 12:34 PM


Echoing what LeeJ said...
Startime55
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9 posted 2005-06-27 04:07 PM


Powerful feelings in so few words...*big hugs*

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11 posted 2005-06-28 08:34 PM


well named james ....you hit home with this one ...
awesome !

Pilgrimage
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12 posted 2005-06-29 03:50 PM


That's sweet.  Friends can see us in a kinder light.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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13 posted 2011-03-27 12:05 PM


Beautiful.


Thank you.
Alison

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