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Quad_dune Junior Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 26Ontario ,Canada |
Your heart races your head throbs. Your head throbs. Its like you’re in a nightmare and you just can’t get out. You try to open your eyes but they just won’t open. As if you’re in a dark room and you don’t know what lies beneath the shadow of darkness. It’s like a blanket of snow in the dead of winter. You can’t breath, like your choking your own flesh. Your palms are sweaty as if you’re making a life or death decision. You can’t think, Your mind is cluttered with thoughts, Like will I live? If so, for how much longer? You scream for help, but the sounds just won’t come out, instead a short gasp of air. It’s like your fighting for your life. But the odds are stacked against you. You try run but you stand your ground. Like a tree whose roots sink deep into the earth. You have chills running up and down your spine. Goose bumps forming up and down your arms. You start in a cold sweat, you begin panic but you still don’t know what to do. You look right, left, and then front and back. It’s like you’re a monster imprisoned, confined to that room. You sit down, humming and calming yourself. You tell yourself there’s nothing to fear, But your body says different. The shaking the sweating the horror. You close your eyes hoping to get away from it all. You open your eyes, at ease because it was all a dream. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew, what a ride! Wow!  to Passions |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Very impressive debut post here Quentin! I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome Quentin!! Well written. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I found myself reading this faster and faster LOL  Welcome to Pip! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
welcome. I wil keep an eye out for you. Your style is like mine a very long time ago, when I was angy and mad at the world. -Juju |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The true life of a dream. Welcome to Passions, sir. May you find yourself at bit more at peace, as you went your way through our blue halls. Please, check your e-mail for a special greeting! |
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The One & Only Member
since 2005-01-26
Posts 58Kansas USA |
Yes welcome to pips!! And you feel it all around and it holds you, but yet you feel its all true and real! The it holds on to you even after you wake! hope to see more from you! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Much enjoyed your first post!! |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Great write! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to PIP, Quad_dune. Intriguing write! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yep, some dreams can push you faster and faster into some precarious corner of un-reality, then wake you up just in time. Welcome to Passions!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Quentin~ A compelling write~ Welcome to PiP~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whewww, this made me think about what hostages must go thru...scary...and well written...an edge of your seater read...maybe it's b/c I rented hostage this past weekend? Welcome to PIP...you'll do fine and will look for more of yours...thank you for such an entertaining read |
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Quad_dune Junior Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 26Ontario ,Canada |
Thanks for the warm welcome guys |
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