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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-06-26 02:19 PM



You press your fingers to
my lips...

As if a sudden hush of
understanding.

For once spoken...words would be
distance from this moment.

And only our caress knows the
taste of nearness.


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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2005-06-26 02:27 PM


I sure do enjoy reading you!
this is so soft...

SimplyGold
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2 posted 2005-06-26 02:43 PM


Ericc,

Amazing. Yes, I agree with Sea. I too, enjoy reading you. Next best thing to being there!


SG

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3 posted 2005-06-26 03:44 PM


As gentle as a lover's caress.
Much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Juju
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4 posted 2005-06-26 04:10 PM


This sis so sweat.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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5 posted 2005-06-26 04:18 PM


Lovely, Eric.  The "taste of nearness" - how special that is.
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displaced
6 posted 2005-06-26 08:17 PM


an understanding like that is priceless
iliana
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7 posted 2005-06-27 12:09 PM


Ericc.....outstanding!  ....jo
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8 posted 2005-06-28 04:27 PM


Your words are almost as delightful as the experience of which you write. *S*

Okay... maybe not. LOL But I sure do like your poem! *G*

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9 posted 2005-06-28 06:26 PM


Now I know where romance has gone.

It's apparently in your pen.

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In Your Poetic Mind
10 posted 2005-06-28 06:29 PM


soft and tender....

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

Cloud 9
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11 posted 2005-06-28 07:03 PM


Very nice..
LeeJ
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12 posted 2005-06-29 07:13 AM


Eric, I love your poems, they are so insightful, spirtual, and touch on an area most do not recognize, yet, you understand, and I believe truly feel, it much much more, much greater then physical...Yes?  Profound write
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13 posted 2005-06-29 11:23 AM


hmmm.. I am enjoying the words posted by you Ericc...

M

Jenn E
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14 posted 2005-06-29 01:46 PM


Very nice....soft......
Jenn E

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