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0 posted 2005-06-25 08:21 PM



Note: This is a fictional poem.

I’ve made a decision in my life,
Now don’t you shout,
Wait now-
Listen,

I’ve chosen my wife,
Yes, that’s right,
A wife,
For my future,

No, no, you are not hearing wrong,
This is not love at first sight,
Wait a minute-
Clear your mind,

Would you be so ever kind?
Keep on reading,
Hold all the judgments,
Make no decision,

Left me finish first,
Read this poem in reverse.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-06-25 09:51 PM


very cool, enjoyed and yep read it backwards too!
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2 posted 2005-06-25 09:53 PM


Backwards or forwards...excellent write!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2005-06-26 03:40 PM


Thanks for the comments.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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