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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Lost If I lost you my love I'd be cast adrift No way to hold on, I'd fall through the rift Full of sorrow, and regrets, no life without hope How my soul cries would I ever, ever cope When my regrets Replace my dreams That shall be the time Of my mourning For our dreams Are the rainbows We slide down Making our days sing And our hearts glad If I couldn't see you my love, I'd truly die In wretched sorrow I'd weep,and I'd cry Bemused and dazed I just couldn't go on How can a soul last if its lost its true song When my eyes Cannot see wonder But instead Are fogged with despair That shall be the time Of my desperation For wonders And small miracles Make each day Bright with promise If I couldn't hold you, where would I be? Bereft of warmth, I'd freeze utterly How does a heart feel if its dead and cold? Timid, and shy, instead of bright and bold When I lose my soul In sadness and sorrow And I don't feel the joy That infuses my being That shall be the time Of my torment For joy keeps me alive And eager for The adventure of living If I couldn't reach for you, not touch your soul I'd be empty,nothing inside just a huge dark hole With a void within, I'd be naught but a shell No reason to go forward, drear and unwell When my spirit dies Expires for want of love And I don't feel Love's pure touch Caressing my senses Then shall be the time Of my ending For love is the only reason To keep going onward If I couldn't have your love, I'd surely fade Like a shadow I can't live in nights eternal shade You are my light, I live by your grace With you in my life, everything I can face When my heart reverberates Sings glories of delight Rings with the sound Of Love's utter wonder That is the time of My deliverance For only now that love Enthuses and enlivens My soul, my heart Do I understand The meaning of truth If I lost you my love, where would I be Lost and alone, devoid of company For your love gifts me with truth and light I know in my heart all will be right Marsha Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
MUSHY!!  hey lady, it's great to get to read you again! "If I couldn't have your love, I'd surely fade Like a shadow I can't live in nights eternal shade You are my light, I live by your grace With you in my life, everything I can face" beautiful |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Bemused and dazed I just couldn't go on How can a soul last if its lost its true song" Nice romantic write, Marsha. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is plaigerism!! I wrote this poem for YOU! huh? I didn't? Well, I should have!!  Nice to see you in fine form, mushy, and I've never seen you any other way. You have been missed  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have been conspicuous by your long absence, Sweet English Rose!  "For your love gifts me with truth and light I know in my heart all will be right" ~ so mote it be!  Warm, welcome-back hug, EA |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
It's good to see those pink letters form words of beauty and love again. I've missed them my dear mushy friend. TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...good to read you again |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLovie~ Now THAT'S what I'm talking about !!! You word-stir the passion with loving, loyal poetic phrases~ That's one lucky man you've got ...~  Love you gal~ Miss you too~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hi you all, thank you so very much for reading this bit of nonsense of mine. I'm glad you all enjoyed it, but frankly I know I have and can o a lot better. I do have a valid reason this isn't pure poetic perfection, I have been quite ill this week, there seems to be a bug going about and naturally enough I've caught it. Naturally enough, because every time there's a bug it comes and seeks me out. Anyway thank you all, every one of you are amazingly sweet to keep me fondly in your memories and believe me when I say it, each one of you are tucked into the fond remember of mine. Take care all, I'll be back in soon, I hope to read and reply as always Mushy xx xx xx Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A bug seeks you out? Seems to me like there's only ONE poetic person to call upon, who can make you ALL better! To reiterate the obvious, you HAVE been missed, m'friend... and it is so good to see you come HOME again! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, so nice to read your lovely words once again Marsha! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This, my lady... is wonderful!!! You took words I loved... and wove them into a tapestry so incredible I can no longer imagine them standing alone. *S* Beautiful work from a beautiful heart... Feel better soon, my friend... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
For wonders And small miracles Make each day Bright with promise so romantically YOU!! I am so happy that you are so happy...now get well... love you M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
simply lovely...enjoyed the brush strokes of your words.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
May you never lose your love...James |
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