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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2005-06-25 06:40 PM



Final Directives

Is there any beauty in dying?
Is there an art to such a sadness?
When I am there will I care?

When the stars dim and the night is
chilled,
When song birds sing
and I do not hear,
When friends cease to
come around having said their goodbyes,
please God do not let me linger,
take me home...

SG

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2005-06-25 06:45 PM


smile...

since I posted to this in announcements, I'll repeat:

"I have seen "dead" eyes, my friend.

Each time, they looked amazed."


SimplyGold
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2 posted 2005-06-25 06:50 PM


Yes again, I saw your response as I placed this in the wrong area. Your response sent a chill through me.  Thanks for taking the time.

SG

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2005-06-25 06:57 PM


*hugs*

thanks for writing it, SG.

and as for the "oops"

*shaking my head*

I have taken every wrong bus and even now, post in the wrong forum.

Freudian slip? Maybe some spiritual synchronicity.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-06-25 08:57 PM


Yes, "take me home". A comforting thought when one is suffering so.

My thoughts and prayers continue to be with you both.

Love & Eternal Light,
EA

passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-06-26 02:40 AM


awesome write
SimplyGold
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6 posted 2005-06-26 09:40 AM


Serenity Blaze,

Thanks for being there and your kind email

SG

EA, thank you for your caring. I know we will get through this.

Passing Shadows, thank you. Your response meant alot.

Good wishes to each of you.

With deepest sincerity,
SG

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