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bashlovesemma
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0 posted 2005-06-25 04:12 PM


this was wrote about 2 years ago....

Final Goodbye

I can’t bear to hurt no more,
I’ve tried so hard, trying to convince myself I wasn’t losing you,
My mind says fight, my heart says, do you love her enough to let her go,
This has to be the hardest thing I’ve ever had to do,

All I can do is remember all the good things we did,
Its hard to concentrate with all this torture,
When you left me there, my heart was tore in two,
I can only remember that special night,
It was destiny,

I couldn’t have pictured that night
Being that special in our own way, spot light beaming down on us in the middle of the floor,
If I had all eternity to choose, I took you by the hand,
The soft gentle touch of your hand, I wrapped my arms around you in desperation,
We danced the night away, the song seamed to take a life time to end,

Me gently singing into your ear, all I could do is hold on,
I didn’t want the dance to end, but all good things come to a end,
I wish you had have heard, the ‘I love you’ message in that song,
From this day forward I’ve regretted not telling you,

But what I regret more, is that, I took your friendship for granted,
I sorta thought when we we’re friends we’d be friends for ever,
It’s so very hard to let go, of the woman who planted the love seed in my soul,
But as this song is called, Final Goodbye the rest of the song seams like a strong sense of love, and I can’t just say good bye for the last time.

But I’m a man of his word, never the less, I’m crumbling down inside right now,
Every word I write in this song, I cry with emotion,
This song isn’t just words, it’s my true feelings. No lie,
I’m crying right now, and I don’t think I can end this song, with goodbye,

But I’m blaming myself for everything, I’ve I’v I’ I …..,

< looks down> then ~

’Goodbye’


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1 posted 2005-06-25 07:44 PM


my gosh, this made my eyes water...very emotional write!
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2 posted 2005-06-25 08:02 PM


So much emotion shown in this piece. I loved it.

Poetry is beauty in words.

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3 posted 2005-06-25 08:12 PM


brought tears to my eyes, i just did a final goodbye myself and it is very heartbreaking. especially when its not what you really want.  thanks for sharing

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

bashlovesemma
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4 posted 2005-06-28 02:48 PM


Thank you, I find when I show my peices to people they have had simaliar experiances and feelings, it's good to know!

Thanks,
Sean

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