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Kurai Kumo
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0 posted 2005-06-24 10:59 PM


A rose so perfect,
Forms of liquid,
Pour from the pedals,
The stim standing straight,
Even after being tortured by the rolling winds,
Could this rose resemble the love of us?
Standing through all the trials,
That we've faced when we fell in love?
Could we last as long as this rose?

Be honest to someone's words cause, in the end they will be honest to yours.

© Copyright 2005 Keith A Rusler - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-06-24 11:09 PM


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beautiful write

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-06-25 12:13 PM


Hope so...James
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3 posted 2005-06-25 01:10 AM


Time will tell, and I do wish that you weather all the storms and come out on the other side complete and together

Great write

Tima

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4 posted 2005-06-25 01:12 AM


I really enjoyed this
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