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Kurai Kumo
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0 posted 2005-06-24 09:24 PM


We used to have something so perfect,
That people would wish on the same star every night of every year to have,
But you try and take advantage of my love for you,
I can't deal with the pain,
That everyone looks at me and point cause I'm with you,
Don't you even care?
Don't you even see what you have done to us?
Now I can't even lift my head,
I have to lower it in shame,
I poured my heart out to someone who never even really cared,
That took it and threw it into an ocean of chaos,
Now I turn my back on you,
And spit on he ground you walk on,
I hate you forever,
And I'll never forgive you,
Now I raise my head in pride,
Cause that's was something you could never take from me.

Be honest to someone's words cause, in the end they will be honest to yours.

© Copyright 2005 Keith A Rusler - All Rights Reserved
timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2005-06-24 09:49 PM


That's right... NO ONE Can take your pride

soemtimes it's hard to hang onto it, but if you try you can

Good for you !!

Kurai Kumo
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2 posted 2005-06-24 09:56 PM


Yeah, it is hard to hold on to your pride when someone does a thing to you like that. This poem was about every girlfriend, I have ever had. Cause all they did was cheat on me and I got tired of it now and that last girlfriend was over 6 years ago.

Be honest to someone's words cause, in the end they will be honest to yours.

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3 posted 2005-06-24 10:43 PM


"I poured my heart out to someone who never even really cared,
That took it and threw it into an ocean of chaos,
Now I turn my back on you,"

I've been there....

there are girls out there, that won't treat you like this..


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