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Kurai Kumo
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0 posted 2005-06-24 09:08 PM


The world so dark,
I walk alone in it,
I scream just to see if someone hears me,
But you couldn't even hear a single sound,
I run to look for someone,
No one is here,
I'm all alone in the cold world,
The rain pours on my face,
I wipe away the tears,
I try and pick myself off the ground,
But I'm too weak,
Do I lay here and wait?
Or do I just die in my own pool of sorrow?

Be honest to someone's words cause, in the end they will be honest to yours.

© Copyright 2005 Keith A Rusler - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-06-24 09:16 PM


you and I are thinking along the same lines tonight
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
2 posted 2005-06-24 09:50 PM


Nope !

You pick yourself up and dust yourself off and you give it another shot.  

Peace to you m'friend

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2005-06-24 10:34 PM


yep, you pull yourself up by your bootstraps and hold your head high and know that eventually, it gets better
Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2005-06-24 11:07 PM


after rain comes
well, you know
that band of colors?

don't mind me, I am the proverbial optimist

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