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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-06-23 10:56 AM



Bored or tired
She’ll probably give in

Just to get him—
To stop doing that

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-06-23 11:30 AM


good one
Juju
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2 posted 2005-06-23 11:43 AM


I know that one to well. Though I am usually more stubborn(;

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-06-23 11:56 AM



Very diplomatic write!  
LOL...enjoyed this one, John!

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-06-23 01:48 PM


hmmmmm, sounds like two children...

but, as always, enjoyed

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2005-06-23 10:21 PM


and thus, rewards for bad behavior...

enjoyed

Enchantress
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6 posted 2005-06-23 10:29 PM


LOL...enjoyed!
SoundWaves
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Center Stage
7 posted 2005-06-23 11:37 PM


That made me giggle...

The spotlight can only get brighter.

timothysangel1973
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8 posted 2005-06-24 12:12 PM


Geez... how many times have I thought that very same thing... hehe

"If I just give in... he'll stop that!!"

I loved this, most definetely a KEEPER


Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2005-06-24 09:27 AM


learned behavior.

tsk.

very nice John.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Pilgrimage
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10 posted 2005-06-24 12:21 PM


Of course.  You tell a whole story in four lines, and engage me emotionally too.  Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Startime55
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11 posted 2005-06-24 12:30 PM


*giggling* Opps...sounds about right sometimes...*hugs*

Drauntz
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12 posted 2007-04-20 04:59 PM


"Bored or tired" here is in your poem.
I used it too in  my "Sigh". I did not steal from you. but i am very honored that I chose some words that a good poet was using.
feel good.

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