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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-06-23 04:37 AM


Spiders web shattered
mirror, jolted from
dreams, measuring a
day of quietude,
serenely pulling sweet
flower stalks between
fingers sensitive, feeling
gossamer strands golden
in mornings glow.
Laughing inwardly with
insouciant buoyancy, like
a chuckling stream,
before clooping rivers
drift,abruptly eddying
round smoothed moss
streamed emerald boulders.
Raising from streaming
dreams, bubble oxygenated,
rising as steam,
gulped to the
throats of songbirds,
blarred joyously to
the flawless day.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2005-06-23 07:12 AM


lovely, this certainly renders a mood of great fondness, care and thankfulness

Enjoyed

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-06-24 05:13 AM


well done write here
put me in a good mood

passing shadows
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