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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-06-23 02:42 AM



Bury my soul instead stiffle my heart
its taking to much time. the cracks in
my walls are bleeding blood tears. For
my real ones are gone out of fear.

make a call at 230am,what am I doing
my brain saids. why would he want to talk
to you he is the one that broke you.

chance I took and made the call hung up fast
without a pause. He called back wondering who
called his phone asking who who?

Plain as the day is long I wimper and say I'm sorry
it was a mistake,sorry for awakening you

Silent corse phone hung up aburt as the waves crash
in and out onto the sand fading away my dream castle
just mere wet sand.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2005-06-23 02:49 AM


this is sad
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-06-23 07:14 AM


this was indeed painful, butcha know, no one can make you feel anything but you, your in charge, put your heart and soul, into you...

Exceptional writing....

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2005-06-23 02:06 PM


yes i understand that but at the very least i got a great poem out of the misery

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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