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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-06-27 06:48 AM


Make it so

God forbid I cannot see
The morning sun and face of thee
The effervescing clings of dew
The essence of the wings of you

You are my fancies butterfly
The gold within a passing sky
The emerald green that fills my scene
The outer and the in-between

The spirit of my phantoms lush
The paint within a rainbows blush
The odor of a rose in grace
The tender of your lace embrace

You wake my soul each mornings kiss
The sender of a morning’s bliss
And take my hand to fly the skies
And render love before my eyes

God forbid I cannot see
The morning sun and face of thee


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2005-06-27 07:22 AM


The effervescing clings of dew
The essence of the wings of you


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Oh how I love the way you do what you do when you do it to it!!
You are the Emperor of Rhyme and your dragon aint half bad either...LOL  

You consistantly fill these sonnets with so many subtle rhymes of humility, humanity, and wisdom, that you make it look easy.
You must be a poet, huh? *L*         

*ww*




Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2005-06-27 07:23 AM


Oh, yes, God forbid indeed!  Beautiful words!
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-06-27 08:28 AM


its so nice to be loved and love...and this proves devotion to that purpose...this was beautiful...

Morning my friend...wishing you a lovely day down there in Florida


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-06-27 08:38 AM


Morning Sy!
This is a wonderful morning read.
Hope you are enjoying life in the sunny south.
I think you have sent the heat up this way.
In the 90's again today.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2005-06-27 08:40 AM



+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+
With the rising of the sun,
~ As the day has just begun,
May your skin be kissed by dew,
And your skies be always blue.

Your essence is a spirit free,
Spanning rainbows forever be.
You paint the skies with thy brush pen,
You fly above all other men.

Tender is your soul of grace,
With touch as soft as tatted lace.
Your scent is sweet as summer rose,
And through your pen your fancy flows.

You have the essence of butterfly,
Across PiP's blue, your sonnets fly.
Your readers wake every morn,
To read your sonnets, daily born.

To you I send an angel kiss,
And blessings for a life of bliss.
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*

EA
Flowers


scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
6 posted 2005-06-27 08:55 AM


Well done Sy!

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2005-06-27 11:20 AM


JM,
Nothing subtle about what you say here. LOL


Honeybunch
You are a love. Hugs

LeeJ
And the top of the morning to you. Hugs

Nancy,
So we'll make it ice tea today. Hugs

Earth Angel
What is given will be recieved.
You are a talented Angel.

scorpio,
Thank you my friend.

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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In a corporeal internship...
8 posted 2005-06-27 11:42 AM


Warp-factor-5, Number One.  

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2005-06-27 11:50 AM


MARK,
That's heading for the stars. LOL

Cloud 9
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Ca
10 posted 2005-06-27 12:32 PM


Beautiful...
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
11 posted 2005-06-27 01:13 PM


Cloud 9
Thank you so much.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
12 posted 2005-06-27 03:26 PM


God listened to heartfelt plea
Sending to the sight of thee
Glories of creative hands
From beauty of many lands

Words sing songs within the trees
Caressing each one it sees
Gentle touch of summer wind
When color, sight, sound combined

Bright plumage in silent flight
Fills the heart with pure delight
Lifts the soul to soar above
In flights of fantasies love

Scents of summer fill the air
Flowers bow in prideful flare
They dance amid brilliant green
In meadows along a stream

God listened to heartfelt plea
Sending to the sight of thee

Your words can't help but inspire a vision to take form in the heart of the reader...Magnificent writing...*big hugs*

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
13 posted 2005-06-27 03:31 PM



Ask...



and ye shall
receive.


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