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Open Poetry #35

Closing My Eyes

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2005-06-22 03:10 PM

Closing My Eyes

Closing my eyes
I feel your warmth
beside me,the scent
of you fills
the room

Closing my eyes
I hear your heart
beating,each breath
you take.

Closing my eyes
I see you.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2005-06-22 03:11 PM

ouhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. ... ........................ . . .

-Juju

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-06-22 03:14 PM

Lovely writing!

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2005-06-24 12:12 PM

So very romantic...Wonderful, heartfelt words...I loved the read...*hugs*

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-06-25 10:52 AM

Oh, this was sooo sweet! If I were you, I'd never open my eyes! lol

I enjoyed this precious piece of innocence.

Love & Light,
EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-06-25 01:44 PM

I know the feeling...yes

you've described it well

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

6 posted 2005-06-26 11:48 PM

I thank each of you for the wonderful comment
on this.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

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