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miss you... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I remember your touch electricity snapped sparks didn’t fly- they danced as if to some earthy, tribal drum beating sensual supernatural stirring in me the deepest kind of want I would ever know . . . . . . god, I miss you so much ~SEA~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh dear Susan...  this just brought me to tears this morning |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"sparks didn’t fly- they danced as if to some earthy, tribal drum" Hauntingly beautiful Susan... You do these so well. Hugs YOU! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautifully exp[ressed , I understand this so much Hope |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
gawd Susan, this tugs gal. Nicley nicely done! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
heart hugssss the longing aches..... I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Inspied words, Very well done adagio |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh do you write life, and love like no body's business  |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Very much enjoyed this write SEA. Chris The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thank you all very much for taking the time to read this and reply so nicely  and Chris...Welcome to Pip!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
awww . . . where he be still?  |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
**sigh** Very nice. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such beautiful ache you write... wonderful! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I love the image this write creates Susan. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Oh girlie ... I know ...~ I love this one~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sighhh Susan, you write the ache beautiful. Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ah...ah.... yessssss.... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful words of love and longing. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
The longing in your words, I could feel. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks you guys for the read, and the really nice replies |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SEA, I do feel this.....oh, how well you said it. ......jo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Missing someone has so many layers, but each one has the same hurt and desires. Loved the picture as well! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your longing was felt right down to my toes...sensually deep feeling that are so gentle but so powerful...Stunning...*big hugs* |
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