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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-06-22 07:27 AM


On the Wind

On the wind of mystic awe
I send my fantasy to soar
In amongst the white of clouds
To change them into hues of shrouds

To cloak myself in forty greens
To lay me down in forty scenes
To pull the seven vales apart
And show them to my crying heart

I feast upon each phase of hew
The precious color of it dew
Let it sooth my hungers tear
And wash away the smell of fear

And in the pleasure of their wake
I shake the apple of the snake
This hungers pang within my soul
And once again I reach my goal

Surcease of sorrow of my day
Balanced in a dreams display


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-06-22 07:38 AM


it is fear which keeps us from doing and experiencing so many things...once again, you melt my eyes, giving the reader much to ponder, humbly....

Hugs to ya for this and thank you

scorpio
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2 posted 2005-06-22 07:52 AM


Well done Sy.  Keep soaring on those winds of mystic awe.

believe in what your heart feels...

SEA
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3 posted 2005-06-22 09:44 AM


"And in the pleasure of their wake
I shake the apple of the snake
This hungers pang within my soul
And once again I reach my goal"

I really liked this part....
says so much for me

Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2005-06-22 12:43 PM


I always love how you rhyme, I can never get it right lol.

_Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Kristabell
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5 posted 2005-06-22 01:04 PM


That is beautiful! Nice write.

Kristabell

Sunshine
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6 posted 2005-06-22 01:36 PM


Just keep writing s Sy...

that's all we ask.








Startime55
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7 posted 2005-06-22 01:45 PM


Again your words inspire me to put pen to paper and try to bring alive a dream...Your words do much to touch the soul of all who believe in the magic within our hearts...*big hugs* Thank you, so much, for the vision you brought to life and the words that inspired me to write...

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