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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Up Close I've seen you up close and I've watched you from afar, I feel like I know you but only you and your loved ones know who you really are. You're fascinating to me, I enjoy this woman that I see. I value your concern for me and enjoy your graceful beauty and your gentle personality. My heart yearns to tell you how it feels. Looking at you up close, I realize that you're one of the most beautiful women in this world. JamesLee June21 2005 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I hope she comes closer, James. I gather from your poetry you have a good heart to share. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
James, We should all be fortunate to meet someone like her well done adagio |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
beauty through the eyes of love is perfect! sweetly written. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
geez but you are a sweet one..  enjoyed this |
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Kurai Kumo Junior Member
since 2005-06-23
Posts 32Houston, Texas, USA |
That is a very good poem. It real touched me. That poem reminds me of this girl that I fell in love with over 5 years ago and never told her how I felt. It might sound like in a way but whatever. I really liked it. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Gawd how sweet.... Hey, do you give classes on how to be sweet and swoon a lady? Or - write poetry I know a few guys that could use a lesson or two hehe Loved this one James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Blues Serenade, passing shadows, adagio, marcel, Sea, Kurai Kumo and timothysangel for the nice responses... Timothysangel, after I lost someone I really cared for I became more determined to listen to a womans heart...I learned the hard way...now I try to listen and make adjustments...that goes both ways...but at least I'm sincerely trying to do my part...something I never did before...James |
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Kurai Kumo Junior Member
since 2005-06-23
Posts 32Houston, Texas, USA |
I 4got to say. That i'm giving this to that girl when I meet her. I'm going to have this poem in my wallet every day til I meet her again. You inspire me to become a better poet and more romantic person. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
JamesLee, this is Special!!  ....jo |
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