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scorpio
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0 posted 2005-06-21 07:52 AM



Dance Me

Fingers laced together.
Bodies musically touching.
Dancing cheek to cheek

believe in what your heart feels...

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SimplyGold
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1 posted 2005-06-21 08:56 AM


Ah, dancing is so sweet. Very nice

SG

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2 posted 2005-06-21 09:50 AM


well done!
scorpio
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3 posted 2005-06-21 11:05 AM


Thank you Simply Gold.  Your comments are appreciated.

Thank you Dixie for stopping in.

believe in what your heart feels...

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4 posted 2005-06-21 11:19 AM


Beautifully done...A joy to read....*hugs*

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5 posted 2005-06-21 11:54 AM


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Hello Scorpio!
Well, this sure makes me feel like slooow dancin'.
Care to join me on the dance floor?
I just happen to know a perfect place.
Well done~wonderful visuals.
~Smiles, Hugs, & Luv ya, Tinker~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2005-06-21 12:23 PM


Slow dancing...the magic words.  How could I turn down such an invitation Tinker?  You've got the place and I've got the music.  

believe in what your heart feels...

scorpio
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7 posted 2005-06-21 12:43 PM


Karen thank you for your kind comments.

believe in what your heart feels...

Juju
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8 posted 2005-06-21 02:43 PM


I like short poems.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

scorpio
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9 posted 2005-06-21 03:00 PM


Thank you Juju.

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2005-06-21 04:05 PM


Scorpio~
You splashed just enough beautiful ink to lead me to the loveliest visual of this poetic moment~



*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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scorpio
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11 posted 2005-06-21 04:57 PM


Marge thank you.  Your reply made me smile.

believe in what your heart feels...

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12 posted 2005-06-21 06:48 PM


These are one of my favorite kind of poems....

You've said so much with just a few little words!!!!

Very lovely.....I wonder if you've written any more of these little bitties!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


scorpio
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13 posted 2005-06-21 07:59 PM


Thank you Bridgette.  I'm pleased you enjoyed this short write.

believe in what your heart feels...

SmartChick
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14 posted 2005-06-21 08:45 PM


Very nice!
scorpio
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15 posted 2005-06-21 08:50 PM


Thank you Sue.  I appreciate your comments.

believe in what your heart feels...

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