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Juju
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0 posted 2005-06-20 10:00 PM



Amore Phobia #4

Love to me is a storm
It comes in strong and fast
With out warning
And when it is over
It leaves devastation

How can I love again?
When I’m still picking up
Each one of those moments
I continually find
Hidden in a corner

And like all real bad storms
I’ll take shelter somewhere
Behind walls of concrete
That I built my self
Until the storm passes

-Juju

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1 posted 2005-06-20 10:57 PM


Boy can I relate to this poem, and have built many a wall myself, only to realize not only did it keep them out, but it also kept me in.

Nicely done, and unfortunately all to familiar for many I think.


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passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-06-21 01:24 AM


dang! I understand too well!
Margherita
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3 posted 2005-06-21 07:05 AM


Amore, amore, amore ... quanto dolore!

It seems we can't love without suffering!

Well expressed.

Love, Margherita

Juju
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4 posted 2005-06-21 02:44 PM


I am glad you guys enjoyed this poem!

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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5 posted 2005-06-23 01:04 AM


Walls don't last....one push from the right direction, and down they come! Build inner self and inner strength...that's what to do with all that concrete and re-bar.....so the waves can pile on, and you don't have to hide from them.

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Juju
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6 posted 2005-06-23 11:10 AM


Thank you rat leader!

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

froggy
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7 posted 2005-06-24 06:42 AM


Wonderful read JuJu.
Was there years ago.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

LeeJ
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8 posted 2005-06-24 07:26 AM


how can you love again...????

Silly...like this /pip/Forum92/HTML/003648.html

Hugs to you

Juju
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9 posted 2005-06-25 09:46 AM


Thank you froggy and LeeJ.  Lee jay that is such a lovely poem.  Thank you for sharing it with me.(:

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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