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Teeter-Totter |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Teeter-totter We walk upon a teeter-totter Weather walker, jotter or plotter Some walk this path with lace and rose And some with fantasies suppose Some would sniff it from a cork And some find nettles on the walk But all would seek this precious path Regardless of the aftermath Some find butterflies in May Some would find a place to stay And some would find a life of chase And some would find a wife of taste The Teeter-Totter bends with weight Depending on the sigh of freight Some will back to stay the bend And some will charge into the end I myself have chosen rhyme And dance upon a stage of time |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
The Teeter-Totter bends with weight Depending on the sigh of freight Some will back to stay the bend And some will charge into the end you certainly have chosen rhyme and very aptly so...this was my first read of the morning...and ya know, nobody could say it better...hugs and Happy Monday! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'I myself have chosen rhyme And dance upon a stage of time' Ah, I thought I heard a little poetic soft-shoe going on~ Dance on poet dear ... pencil me in on your dance card~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And a beautiful dancer you are... gracing this stage called life... and winning many a fan along the way... I know I'm one. *S* I enjoyed this, my friend! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooh I'm so glad I didn't miss this one Sy! Love it and into my library it goes! Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I for one am glad you chose rhyme  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I wish I could ryme all of the time. I use to be able to, but now it seems mine have a rythem. (; Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You are a sweetheart. Marge I certainly will. suthern Yes you are one of them.  Nancy You are my favorite huggable. Sharon You are a love. Juju Now I know you can rhyme. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
In spite of the highs and lows, we learn to live with our choices. But no one takes their rhyme as high as you do, or lends so many good thoughts to ponder. Your poetry is a true gift, Seymour Tabin, Sir.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade You are a charmer. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh My...and you dance so perfectly too...each turn takes us into your heart...Wonderful words that leave their print....*big hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Thank you so much. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Once again your talent shines! a master at work  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
adagio You are very kind. |
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