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Magnus
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0 posted 2005-06-19 11:08 AM


To touch a mighty hand, to rest within a grasp, to hold a
thought of remembrance.   To walk a shore of sprinkled
sand, to wade the brine of reeds...To ever hold you close
though all is now but dust.

To climb a capped peak and feel the eyes of God....and
wish to once again just say....Though words fail,
I love you my father. And, in my voice, my eyes, the
tremor of my own hands....the smile that will
never wane...in these, all these...you are here
within....

within me...

Happy Father’s Day .... for I, your greatest gift...do love
and treasure you immensely, eternally....till time
brings us together once more.


[This message has been edited by Magnus (06-19-2005 12:17 PM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-06-19 11:27 AM


Barry,
A beautiful write.

SimplyGold
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2 posted 2005-06-19 12:10 PM


Magnus,

Beautiful write, so tender and full of love.

SG

Margherita
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3 posted 2005-06-19 01:33 PM


Your dear Father smiles from Above, dear Barry, you are such a beautiful son.

And your words show your heart and beauty so well.

Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2005-06-19 02:09 PM


Magnus~

Totally touching~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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