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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-06-19 03:08 AM



Flower girl—

Her looks
Without knowing


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Margherita
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1 posted 2005-06-19 04:55 AM


There is no greater beauty than that which we are unaware of.

The radiance expands unhindered by consciousness.

An Eden-like situation, yes.

Enjoyed this.

Love,
Margherita

ice
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2 posted 2005-06-19 06:52 AM


John
It is this animal sense of attraction that has gotten me poked in the ribs many times by my wife..."Her looks   Without knowing" indeed...


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serenity blaze
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3 posted 2005-06-19 02:39 PM


I was just telling a friend that there is something immensely appealing about those who don't know they are immensely appealing.

Another nice glance through your eyes, John.

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4 posted 2005-06-23 12:17 PM


I have beheld such a one....and it was true.

You're the absolute master of brevity!

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5 posted 2007-04-23 04:32 PM


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