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Open Poetry #35

Barracuda Bay 1972

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-06-18 11:11 PM

Dark brilliance
Unknown audience
Seeking the nature of tides

Which it rides
From stage that abides
The questioning

To learn in learning
Understand in knowing
While the growing
Goes on

Toward dark brilliance
Unknown audience
Seeking the nature of tides

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

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1 posted 2005-06-23 01:42 AM

Yes, dark brilliance, blooming like the tide. It's all below the surface here, but worthe the dive.

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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-06-23 07:22 AM

wonderfully executed, makes me wish I were snorkling a barrier reef....loved this

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