Open Poetry #35 |
The Scent of Rain |
SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
The Scent of Rain water trickles down the window it leaves patterns as it slides to a halt the smell of the rain brings back pictures in my mind of a time when all was safe eager for life's unfolding i remember your eyes like liquid crystals of a catseye marble Your body full of strength the defination of your muscles pronounced by the contours of light only an artist with a charcoal crayon could define its splendor the scent of the rain brings me back to a time when life was born of beauty when you and I were one when the world was safe and love was unfolding [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (06-18-2005 11:04 PM).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is wonderful....I am a sucker for the love poems that grace these blue pages so beautifully. My own heart aches to return to a time of surety and beauty. "the scent of the rain brings me back to a time when life was born of beauty when you and I were one when the world was safe and love was unfolding" Rain does have a way to bring our minds back to special memories and safer times!!!! And you portrayed it wonderfully. Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write I do love poetry about rain |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I was drawn to your title...loveing the scent of rain myself. This was much much more! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Passing Shadows, JamesMichael and Martie, Thank you all for your feedback and for taking the time to peek in and read. SG |
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