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Gunslinger
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0 posted 2005-06-18 12:36 PM



My nights have been lonely,
The miles have been long.
But I can't forget about you.
I know that it's over,
I know that you're gone,
But, darling, I miss you, that's true.

Your words were so tender-
That I was entranced.
But I should have known all along...
That feelings betray you,
And so does romance.
Besides which, the whole thing was wrong.

I guess you've forgotten,
The dreams that we shared.
For I know that you felt it too-
I guess you were wiser,
And probably scared...
But dared do what you had to do.

But when I get lonely...
And slumber won't come,
I sit down amd write a few lines;
I know when you read them-
You'll know who their from...
And know I still feel that you're mine.

© Copyright 2005 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2005-06-18 01:14 AM


i always enjoy reading you...you are one of my favorites...
Justbleu
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2 posted 2005-06-18 01:34 AM


Lovely....with gentle vulnerability.

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-06-18 04:40 AM


John, this just aches

good write

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-06-18 05:07 AM


Enjoyed...James
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