Open Poetry #35 |
'Tis been a long week... |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I had me a girlfriend, her name was Suzie, Suzie the floozie, she was a real doozie, Her lips were bright red, I think from the wine, She drank as a chaser, after sippin’ some “shine”, She lived in a shack, out past the mill, Out in the woods, by Big Daddy’s still. There was but one problem, with Suzie and me, Big Daddy and I, had a problem you see, Big Daddy desired, that I didn’t woo her, ‘Cause he hadn’t much use, for a young revenuer. Big Daddy’s buck shot, flyin’ over my head, It got me to thinkin’, that he wished me dead, He thought I was comin’, to bust up his still, And I really do think, that he meant to kill, This poor revenuer, who it seemed had the hots, For his little Suzie, I liked her a lots. It seemed to me, it was love or my job, Or maybe my life, she made my (heart) throb, So I turned in my badge, gave up my career, So with my dear Suzie, I could be near, I moved out past the mill, in a little old shack, With Big Daddy and Suzie, I didn’t look back, Now I am the lookout, Big Daddy’s main man, An integral part, of Big Daddy’s clan, Suzie and me, I sure wish you knew her, Well adios, goodbye, from an ex-revenuer. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is soooo great I really enjoyed |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is good, and well written. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is sooo funny and cute!!!! Made me laugh!!!! Thank You!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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