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A Show of Love
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A Show of Love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite A show of love Softly, softly hardly breathing Once upon a summers evening A rush of essence cleared the gloom From passing through a quiet room The whisper of a launch no more A silent leap that leaped the floor This furtive gesture flew in quest From floor through air to rest my chest A wet and tender laced embrace A flowing tongue that licked my face In from the fields fresh and dirty An old bitch that I named thirty She’s a rheumy old nanny And herself a grannies granny Who challenged all by her permit Those dare come near and would not fit It was for her a cunning coup To leap and land before I knew In an instant without delay She gave her love in rude display I cannot question how she gives I only know that’s how it is |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling with the pup... thank you!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A wet and tender laced embrace A flowing tongue that licked my face In from the fields fresh and dirty An old bitch that I named thirty boy oh boy, they certainly bring much joy into our lives, don't they... Hugs you!!!!! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
how cute  My spirit will rise |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sweet "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The whisper of a launch no more A silent leap that leaped the floor This furtive gesture flew in quest From floor through air to rest my chest A wet and tender laced embrace A flowing tongue that licked my face In from the fields fresh and dirty An old bitch that I named thirty She’s a rheumy old nanny And herself a grannies granny Who challenged all by her permit Those dare come near and would not fit It was for her a cunning coup To leap and land before I knew In an instant without delay She gave her love in rude display ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ me thinks this is randys kinda woman lol TIME TO SHOW SY SOME LOVE!!!     |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a morning! thanks for the smile |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh my...a vision that has me still laughing...Thank you for the wonderful smile...*big hugs* |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very cute!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 This is what I saw and I sure liked it! Was sure it wasn't Isobel, but then again, maybe? |
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