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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-06-16 02:13 PM



What sense
Does it make

How now
This summer girl
Laughing

Handing me
A book of poems

[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (06-16-2005 03:07 PM).]

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2005-06-17 01:49 AM


This is awesome.
iliana
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2 posted 2005-06-17 01:52 AM


Love this!
LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-06-17 09:25 AM


boy, does she ever....nature in her finest array...

wonderful John...

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4 posted 2005-06-20 04:24 PM


This delights me.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2005-06-20 04:52 PM



Big smiles here!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2005-06-23 12:56 PM


Oh, it makes wonderful sense! Poems like this make me want to study poetic methods -- with the person who wrote them.

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Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2005-06-24 10:45 AM




wonderful!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2006-01-14 04:51 PM




This is like finding a pearl from the sands of time in the archives~



*Huglets*
~*Marge*

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9 posted 2007-04-23 04:22 PM


The Beautiful Blueskaya.
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