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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2005-06-16 05:55 AM



Thy soul shall find itself adrift,
When tears come to fall upon the surface-
of an heartache in a moments grief
where emotional feelings become more like waves,
washing over the core, the heart now sleeping-
on a gentle thought it had before all failed
to be the meaning of a paradise.

Be silenced whilst in thy solitude,
where the gentle tone of nothingness-
shall shadow over thoughts
thou art not alone in the passage,
to the mending of the hearts;
others shall numb to this pain.

The blooming of the first hearts open,
shall wonder lost amongst the crowds-
till like all, we fall below our heights
upon knees gathering the broken pieces,
that once was a innocence now lost;
and tears shall run their course-
as petals of the heart lay in death amongst
the vision’s of the moments held in thought.

And night shall whisper comfort,
as the pillow becomes the gentle form-
the stars never wept some might say
but I’ve seen the falling of a star,
And all attention is upon the beauty
of the falling of a heart, let others-
find you not in heaven but somewhere
many go and stay for years left wondering,
Through the passage of life alone.

© Copyright 2005 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2005-06-16 06:05 PM


quote:
And night shall whisper comfort,
as the pillow becomes the gentle form-
the stars never wept some might say
but I’ve seen the falling of a star,



The soul knows something about the comforting whispers of the night ...

Beautiful, dear Lee.

Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2005-06-17 07:40 PM


Enjoyed...James
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2005-06-18 01:56 AM


Very nice!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-06-18 04:44 AM


cool write
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