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timothysangel1973
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0 posted 2005-06-16 12:01 PM


I can't fix what's broke with you
but, atleast I can relate
We can walk together a while
and feel each other's ache

I certainly won't take away
all the pain you have inside
I'm still fighting too
and just like you,
along for the ride

I won't tell you it's okay
when even I deep down know better
But, walk with me my friend
two broken-hearts together

We can reflect on yesterday
laugh and smile and regret
yet knowing that we have each other
and the ride, ain't over yet

One more day, one more step
one more bone of courage more
One more story, one more tear
and, we'll leave this one at the door

Ache leaves, as it comes
like a theif in the night
walk with me today
and together, we'll be alright

© Copyright 2005 Tima Chavis Cooke - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2005-06-16 12:29 PM


Lovely...I remember the special friends that helped me to get through some hard times in my life...James
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2 posted 2005-06-16 01:41 AM


What a tender heart you have Tima, and I am sure there are many here, including me that would hold a hand and follow the parade you started here.  A loving poem of friendship.


~* Carpe' Diem *~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-06-16 03:38 AM


oh my...I'm all misty-eyed

dang it

Tima, this is gorgeous...I'm not sure what to say right now, I'm speechless...

thank you, thank you

saved_by_grace
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4 posted 2005-06-16 08:35 AM


I thought this was absoultely BEAUTIFUL!!  You are such a great friend to write some thing like this for them.  
I will be saving this one...so the next time I have a friend that needs a hug...I can send this one to them ~ if that is okay with you that is.   

Hugs.... ~ Becka

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-06-16 09:03 AM


Absolutely beautiful and loving write from your heart Tima!
Sunshine
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6 posted 2005-06-16 09:09 AM



Startime55
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7 posted 2005-06-16 12:31 PM


WOW!! This poem is absolutely wonderful...What a great invite filled with truth and wisdom...I love it...BRAVO!!!*big hugs*

miscellanea
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8 posted 2005-06-18 01:01 AM


What a beautiful heart you've shown.  This is quite lovely.  Very much enjoyed. To the library!

           miscellanea

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2005-06-18 02:25 AM


oh sweetie--I am so sorry I'm late for the ride, but thank you so much for thinking of me, and nod, Dixie, yes--it seems to be a really rough time for so many.

Thank you so much for friendship and your ever patient, ever understanding heart.

love you


Justbleu
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10 posted 2005-06-18 02:29 AM


You have a beautiful heart it seems.....

Lovely write.....

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


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