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Pilgrimage
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0 posted 2005-06-14 01:14 PM



When the Dawn Breaks

When the dawn breaks on forever
we will greet the risen son,
revealed in all his glory,
and we’ll know the battle’s won.

Though the night’s grown dark and bitter
I can sense the coming day,
I can hear the hallelujahs
when his children kneel to pray.

I can see the light of heaven
on each happy smiling face.
I can hear the angels shouting
when they play Amazing Grace.

We will stand before our savior
when the final trumpet rings,
in that bright eternal morning
when they crown him King of Kings.


Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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1 posted 2005-06-14 01:24 PM


Hallelujah, praise the Lord! I feel like joining you in spiritual song! Wondrously hopeful and up-lifting!

~ A spell-binding write full of Light!

Love, Peace, Light, & Harmony,
Linda


Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2005-06-14 01:27 PM


Thank you Linda.  You know, I've written hundreds of verses, and some poems, but the ones about my faith can be counted on the fingers of one hand.  I thought about that the other day, so I wrote this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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3 posted 2005-06-14 03:26 PM


Nan~
This is just so beautifully YOU~

Now ... take this verse and go forth and MULTIPLY !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2005-06-14 04:18 PM


Marge, you make me smile.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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5 posted 2005-06-14 06:32 PM


this is just beautiful
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6 posted 2005-06-15 01:00 AM


One of my hopes and dreams and belief....James
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7 posted 2005-06-15 07:38 AM


~spiritually moving spill~

**babygirL**

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8 posted 2005-06-15 08:45 AM


I would like to echo Marge's reply! ~
"Go forth and multiply".

This seemed to flow from your pen ~ and from your spirit.

You have a wondrous new genre to explore ~ and to gift your readers with!

Love & Light,
Linda

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9 posted 2005-06-15 12:53 PM


Thanks guys.  I appreciate it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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