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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-06-13 08:54 PM



Accused
Of having
Too soft a voice—

Happily
She smiles
And hides her face

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
froggy
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1 posted 2005-06-13 10:58 PM


Simple and yet it speaks more.
Enjoyed the read.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

suthern
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2 posted 2005-06-14 09:20 AM


You've captured her perfectly... this is fantastic!
Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-06-14 09:58 AM



This...whispers...

Thank you.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-06-14 12:30 PM


and it rocks...I like
youcan'tseeme
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5 posted 2005-06-14 02:01 PM


loved this. oh so much
Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-04-30 02:49 PM


like all, intensed looking.
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