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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-06-13 02:32 PM



Brick by brick
laid down years ago, gone
unused, who knows how long,
the old chimney knows only heat of summer
from outside in,
and bares the coldest winters well…

Where birds have found a nesting device

when, in the spring,
in the spring,

fluttering of wings
are heard
from a baby who fell through…

In the chimney of intention the wings sink,

and one wonders the why of fluffy feathers.

~*~

I've been told my muse went south...
so I had to resort to some instant musings...

http://www.webcom.com/wordings/artofwrite/poetrygenerator.html  

© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-06-13 03:20 PM


I am sure it will return from vacation soon Kari.  Nicely done with this one.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-06-13 03:34 PM


Very nicely written and thanks for the link!
I do believe my muse is with yours.
Hugs Hip-Sis

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
3 posted 2005-06-13 09:52 PM


I am sure your muse will return real soon. And, I'll be waiting and watching. in the mean time, I enjoyed this.
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4 posted 2005-06-14 09:18 AM


I can assure you... your muse has NOT gone south... cause I've been scanning the skies, ready to capture that creature for my own! LOL

You paint a beautiful picture with your words, dear lady. *S*

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-06-14 09:27 AM


I could understand why your Muse would want to head south ~ She has been over-zealous for many a year! ~ But the proof is in the pudding ~ I mean "poetry" ~ she's still guiding your pen!

~ and merci for the link!


Linda

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