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Magnus
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0 posted 2005-06-11 11:07 PM


Carried, hurried, falling softly...shimmering....chilling,
yet so tasteful upon a tongue, as eyes close...
as hands touch and a single drop falls
...binding them...

Rivulets flowing, following slender curves,
wandering onto a sinewed plain....scurried along
by a finger's trace.....in dread of a soft towel....
awaiting the warm and beating glow of earth's sun
...warming them...

A morning's dew....fragments of a moment
when showers fell, when robins flew....
as hands wrote a window's lullabye....
where rains ran the crease of a soul....
and eyes beheld a vision...thrilling them..
And as the brine awaits upon the water's edge,
drops shall fall and mingle.....as hands entwine,
as hearts flutter, as chills bring a sigh upon a touch
of lips..upon a trace of hips....
In wait again the shower that sings a lover's song
....calling them....


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1 posted 2005-06-12 07:43 AM


sweet
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-06-12 07:57 AM


Barry,
I'd say more then sweet. Maybe a howl. LOL

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3 posted 2005-06-12 09:25 AM


This is a beautiful write Barry.

believe in what your heart feels...

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4 posted 2005-06-12 12:37 PM


Magnus~
I quite literally *sighed* my way through this lovely offering~

'A morning's dew....fragments of a moment
when showers fell, when robins flew....
as hands wrote a window's lullabye....'


Yeah ... *sighed*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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