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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2005-06-11 05:59 PM



    
* * *

The element of Love

* * *


I intensely feel

the exploring touch

of the night gazing

into my soul,

a cosmic wind howling

across my emptiness,

a brilliant laser beam

swiftly eradicating

the day’s turmoil

twirling in my mind.

I close my eyes

relaxing into

my element.

The element of Love


I open my third eye

to communicate

with the Night,

accepting her gifts

collected on her roaming

through the depths

of consciousness.

My yearning for you

reverberates through

the infinite extensions

of stellar space.

I emit my secret code

in sweet whispers

dressed in hope.

Wherever you are

You will hear, I know.

We dance within

the same element.

The element of Love


An intoxicating scent

wraps me in its haze,

your heart blooms within mine

caressing my soul

with a fan of silky petals

stirring my very core to sing

to the pleasure of this touch.

My stream of love

erupts in laughter and bliss.

And thus I startle the night

with this flow of gold.

The vivid reflection

of our element.

The element of Love.
* * *


Love, Margherita


© Copyright 2005 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-06-11 06:15 PM


Margherita
A delightful read. soft and mellow.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2005-06-11 06:27 PM


Beautiful write..very hypnotic and relaxing.
Extremely enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

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dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-06-12 01:34 AM


Nice...you got me missing my girlfriend...James
passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-06-12 07:40 AM


very nice
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2005-06-12 12:46 PM


OhMargherita~

'I emit my secret code

in sweet whispers

dressed in hope.

Wherever you are

You will hear, I know'


YOU are versed beauty~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Earth Angel
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6 posted 2005-06-12 04:52 PM


Yes, Dear Margherita, you do "intensely feel" and you express those feelings divinely.

Your "vivid reflections" are always a pleasure to read ~ and experience.

Hugs with much love,
Linda

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2005-06-12 07:34 PM


this was  beautiful..and I love the artwork

~smiling~
M

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In Your Poetic Mind
8 posted 2005-06-12 09:51 PM


this brings such peace.....
beautiful!

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

Margherita
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Eternity
9 posted 2005-06-13 01:04 PM


My dear poet friends, thank you for your kind replies which I enjoyed.

Love, Margherita

iliana
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10 posted 2005-06-16 01:51 PM


This just has to go back to the top.  Margherita, you share such gems with us!  I love the way you have captured this mystery!   ....jo
Startime55
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11 posted 2005-06-16 02:03 PM


Brilliant...absolutel brilliant...a flow of words that intoxicate the senses....*hugs*

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12 posted 2005-06-17 10:47 AM


Wow, they never taught that to me in Chemistry Class
a whole new elemlent to the charts!!!!
bernie

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