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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2005-06-11 03:05 AM



You must be
made of steel,
you are fire resistant.

The east is veiled in flames,
smoke and vapors rise to the sky, forming
shapes, while the wind blows them away.

Try to remember them, these thoughts, try
to embrace them even if they horrify you.


The detailed structure of a
hand in motion, many
unnoticeable broken bones, we are injured
and do not know it.

The west is covered in frozen rain,
a conjured twist about the spine,
time is no longer a necessity.

You are guilty, do not ever forget.

You must've
been an ember in a past life
you
have burned the flesh.

The north has disappeard,
swallowed by the south,
and digested.

© Copyright 2005 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-06-11 04:46 AM


AWESOME



Where the heck have you been? and hows that baby?

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2005-06-11 09:15 AM


Hi Meg!!!!!!!!!!  

very cool new pic!

missed you and your writing..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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3 posted 2005-06-11 09:28 AM


Hi Meghan...
So good to read you again!!
Love the new pic!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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with you
4 posted 2005-06-11 11:08 AM


"You are guilty, do not ever forget.

You must've
been and ember in a past life
you
have burned the flesh"


LOVE it!!!
more poetry please

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5 posted 2005-06-11 05:58 PM


"You must've
been an ember in a past life"

"There is no pain comparable to fire," typed the witch.

I have missed you megs. Every poem you write is a journey.

Margherita
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6 posted 2005-06-11 06:08 PM


Try to remember them, these thoughts, try
to embrace them even if they horrify you.



Wise advice.

Very good write.

Love, Margherita

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7 posted 2005-06-12 07:45 AM


neat write
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8 posted 2005-06-12 09:58 AM


You were missed, love the poem and the new picture Meghan.


~* Carpe' Diem *~

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