navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » Chocolate Girl
Open Poetry #35
Post A Reply Post New Topic Chocolate Girl Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-06-10 07:42 PM



Chocolate girl

Me and the chocolate girl
went to Ko Olina Resort
to get a tan...past the
waterfalls on the golf
course, the tennis courts,
onto the bay where the
guest swim and play...
we set up our towels
into the trade winds,
in the grass just above
the sand...where baby oil
is gently spread on tummy,
back, arms, calfs and thighs,
while I lay beside the chocolate
girl, my body soaking up the
sun, her oil soaked body
giving me the eye, I know
that I'm a lucky one.

JamesLee
June11
2005
I call her chocolate girl
because she loves to take
a tan...I worry about her
getting too much sun and
damaging her skin.


© Copyright 2005 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-06-11 05:20 PM


With this one you have certainly stirred everybody's dream to travel to Hawaii ...

ps she will know in the evening if she exaggerated or not I think ... after sunset the skin begins to burn if it has had too much...

Love,
Margherita


SimplyGold
Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

2 posted 2005-06-11 05:43 PM


Nice imagery.

SG

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2005-06-12 01:23 AM


Thank you Margherita and Simply Gold...I definately burned good...she slightly...James
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #35 » Chocolate Girl

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary