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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2005-06-10 11:38 AM



Anne marie,
she strums the syllables of rain
and taps the cloud covers
with musician fingers,
she hears cicadas sing
and laments her lover this purple eve,
with tears that stream the shattered windows
never blessed with rosecolored awnings,
Anne marie,
she hears the night's cicados sing,
in the wrapping haze of dawns white silence,
she whispers with musician fingers.



[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-11-2005 11:27 PM).]

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-06-10 12:31 PM


Lovely, lyrical penning here Michele.
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Startime55
Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2005-06-10 12:32 PM


Your words sing tenderly of Anne marie...a very touching write...*hugs*

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2005-06-10 12:56 PM


inkedgoddess,
A delight to read.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2005-06-10 02:49 PM


Very beautiful.

Been meaning to ask this, is it just me or does your picture not come up for anyone?

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2005-06-10 03:26 PM


not at all what I expected from the title...and I'm more in awe. A beautiful piece!

Susan,
I can see her profile picture, the one on the left side of the poem, if that's what you mean...I wasn't on earlier to see if she added a picture to go along with her poem...so I'm not sure what pic you are talking about...


EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279

6 posted 2005-06-10 08:44 PM


Absolutely love this! This is the best poem I have read today. Bravo inkedgoddess!
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
7 posted 2005-06-10 10:08 PM


thanks kids for the read
and sue, i don't know, hopefully you get the pleasure of seeing me again one day......lol

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
8 posted 2005-06-11 04:57 PM


You caress the reader's ears with this beautiful piece of  ... music!

Love your poetry!

And ... I do see your picture and I love that too!

Love, Margherita

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