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She Took My Breath
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She Took My Breath |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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She Took My Breath She took my breath and held its way Throughout the night and most the day Placed my sigh in wraps of vie And let them fly within her sky To gather hews within the clouds To weave within the threads of shroud A multicolored ecstasy To light my shadows vanity And on the byways evermore I seeded seeds of apple core To leave a sign that all is well And leave alone the apples hell For long ago I drank its juice And used it as a loose excuse To place the ego of the mind And make a temple for the blind And now I tap a cane of wood A hollow vain of understood |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
deeply moving words this morning Sey... felt ....and enjoyed sir...  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Morning Sy! what we take from every experience makes it worthwhile... have a happy day!"too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is one for the Books of Humble, Sy... Thank you, Sir...    |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! ~ Your readers have reaped the poetic fruits of the seeds that you have sown. You dwell in a world where all is well and burn not in a prideful hell. Your cane of wood is understood. As ye sow, so shall ye reap. Therefore, you should expect to be harvesting crops divine!  EA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You are good, right down to the core! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Afternoon Sy... I so appreciate this write.. Thank you for sharing this one. Hugs~Nancy |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
You sow seeds of joy in the visions you plant with your talented words...they then bring forth a joy of their own to be planted in the lives of those around them...Thank you...*big hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit You are a gentle dove.  Susan, I'll have a happy day if you do too. Sunshine You are a love. Earth Angel I'm ssure you passed your Angels exam with the highest of marks. Martie And you are a flower among flowers. Nancy, A poor payment for your lovely tea and sympathy. Startime55, You are very kind, hugs back. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I hope you already know that I'm sooooo glad you are a poet !!!!!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge You always delight me with your replies. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderful touching write , Seymour you always bring the reader poetic delight Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hope I enjoy your poetry too. Thank you for the reply |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a good read this afternoon...I knew you'd be here when I got done sleeping  that's a good feeling all its own |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing You are a dear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Placed my sigh in wraps of vie And let them fly within her sky To gather hews within the clouds To weave within the threads of shroud A multicolored ecstasy To light my shadows vanity And on the byways evermore I seeded seeds of apple core To leave a sign that all is well And leave alone the apples hell For long ago I drank its juice And used it as a loose excuse To place the ego of the mind And make a temple for the blind And now I tap a cane of wood A hollow vain of understood ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ All I can do is smile at the wit and wisdom of this clever write...what you do with metaphors and symbolism is poetically brilliant....there is so much here to read between the lines and beyond the signs.... You are a rock and roll poet me sweet Sy-babers.   *ww*  Dont give up on me ... I'm about to come alive ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, There is nothing I love more than reading one of your replies. I enjoy it more than my own poetry. WW |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
She took my breath and held its way Throughout the night and most the day Placed my sigh in wraps of vie And let them fly within her sky You are one of a kind, dear Poet Seymour! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita, Enjoy your replies so much. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
too kind My spirit will rise |
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