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bslicker
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0 posted 2005-06-09 12:53 PM


Combined

as the beauty
of you shine’s
beyond reflection
of a water’s picture
ov'r white background
of waves that calm
edges of hearts
united into one
happiness
will travel
through
infinity
of time
.
.
.
.
.
Bernie

"for you"

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

© Copyright 2005 Bernard Slicker - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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1 posted 2005-06-09 12:56 PM


A combination of words that draws a picture of the beauty of your love...Really well done...

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-06-09 12:58 PM


I can't highlight one sentence, cuz one would not be without the other...stunning!
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3 posted 2005-06-09 01:41 PM


what a pretty write Bernie


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4 posted 2005-06-09 01:49 PM


This is beautiful Bernie!!
hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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5 posted 2005-06-09 01:50 PM


*smiling*

BEAUTIFUL Bernie!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

bslicker
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6 posted 2005-06-10 01:51 PM


thank you for reading and reply'g
startime, leeJ, Tima, Nancy and Donna


this was the only gift i could think of to give someone special to me, for her and her new husband.
Plus i finally hit 2000 posts in almost 5 yrs.

bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (06-10-2005 02:41 PM).]

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7 posted 2005-06-11 04:21 PM



Bernie, a beautiful gift from your giving heart.

Blessings to the newlyweds ~ and to you, Dear Heart.

Love & Life,
Linda


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8 posted 2005-06-11 06:14 PM


What a very lovely and precious gift you created.

Congratulations also on your 2000!

Love,
Margherita

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9 posted 2005-06-12 07:44 AM


nice
nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2005-06-12 09:27 AM


A very nice write, Bernie

a tender gift of caring~~
M

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11 posted 2005-06-12 10:28 AM


Utterly sweet.....and I can fully understand your wish to give such a gift. You can be sure this rose will be treasured.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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12 posted 2005-06-13 06:42 PM


Nice writing...James
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13 posted 2005-06-14 11:42 AM


beautiful expression bernie!

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

bslicker
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14 posted 2005-06-14 12:08 PM


EA, Margerita, Dixie, M , Ed, and Lauren

Thank you very very much.

But we still haven't seen any pictures in annoucements,,,
Must still be honeymoon'g....

bernie
  

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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15 posted 2005-06-14 04:50 PM


A loving gift, Bernie!  
bslicker
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16 posted 2005-06-14 04:52 PM


ty Martie
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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17 posted 2005-06-14 06:29 PM


Excellent!!


bslicker
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18 posted 2005-06-14 08:03 PM


Cloud 9
thank you
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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