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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-06-09 08:33 AM


I wondered if she
would again ramble today

or would she write?

She is
two sided,
yet at times
undecided.

If you were to ask
my preference
I would probably say
I am grateful for all
precious moments
when her thoughts
might grace my day.

Well..... if truth be told
I prefer her to ramble
for that is when
she is free to write

with no rules
or restrictions,
laying all expectations
aside
with no one
but herself to please;

for it is then,

only then
that release is found
for everything that she
feels         and sees

in her heart
and            her dreams.

Words spill over
onto wing tips
that carry them
to the skies...

It is there,

only there
where her spirit can fly....

Dotting her I's
and crossing her T's
two sided,
yet at times
undecided..

this is her decree.....

but, I love when she decides
to ramble to me...



I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-09-2005 11:54 AM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-06-09 08:36 AM


Oh, your muse was quite
generous this morning...

and you're smiling!

Well, so is she!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-06-09 08:43 AM


the right and left side of your muse...extemely fancyfree, and yet, noting the belief here....thanks for this morning light....

Hugs

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-06-09 09:04 AM


wonderful!
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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4 posted 2005-06-09 09:44 AM


"but, I love when she decides
to ramble to me..."

so do i m'gentle one, so do i

smiling along with you



mxx


"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

bslicker
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state of mind
5 posted 2005-06-10 12:11 PM


great write
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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6 posted 2005-06-10 05:28 AM


Oh yes I understand this , sometimes emotions surpressed , other times expressed

Hope

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