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The Woman You Want To Be
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The Woman You Want To Be |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY 
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Look at you, without your grace, without your honor You're a fallen angel, with broken wings someday it might heal though And you'll find your honorable grace, without the foolish pride but you have to stop, and do what's right not what's "Right Now", that's how you've fallen all your mistakes, and you still haven't learned What is it that you run from, why do you hide? in the arms of random men, at least for one night You look in the mirror, and turn away is it the sight, or what you know you've done can't you face yourself, and accept your mistakes? no, you turn away, and you run, back to the arms of "Mr. Right Now" You're Pathetic, and weak, I Pity You - More than i should I Look in your eyes, and i see nothing, but shame Who Stole your heart, and left u empty? Did you lose your soul after the first few, or was it gone from the begining? You have so much Hate, but for who or what? I Know what you're Thinking, Who am i to judge but look into my eyes, and you'll see.... i'm the soul that you lost, the hope that you gave up i'm the part of you that wants more, while you settle for less i'm the emotions that you've blocked out, the heart that you deny i'm the feeling that u know u want, i'm the love that you yearn Look in my eyes, and you'll see I'm apart of you - The Woman you want to be. "Trina" Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Who Stole your heart, and left u empty? Did you lose your soul after the first few, or was it gone from the begining? You have so much Hate, but for who or what? I Know what you're Thinking, Who am i to judge but look into my eyes, and you'll see.... i'm the soul that you lost, the hope that you gave up i'm the part of you that wants more, while you settle for less i'm the emotions that you've blocked out, the heart that you deny i'm the feeling that u know u want, i'm the love that you yearn Look in my eyes, and you'll see I'm apart of you - The Woman you want to be. strong insight and understanding... now to find the way to let that woman be what she wants to be.... nicely done ma'am..I enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm apart of you - The Woman you want to be. and the woman you will be, b/c she always gets her way....(hugs), if not, she will fill you with guilt and saddness...until she wins you forever....(wink) Well done lady!!!! I liked! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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