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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-06-09 04:23 AM


Reflections, from sun,
mind.Today with
lazy weather, thoughts
wrapped into today's
paper, flying down
windy station platforms.
Fuss, too much
hurry, can you
see things going
past you, if
you are flying
at ninety-two
miles per hour?
Life dictates people,
rather than reverse.
Step back, observe
the madness being
played out in
front of you.
Find what matters
most to you?
Embrace it, nurture
it, traps await,
to destroy your
carefully ordered world.


Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (06-10-2005 04:21 AM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-06-09 04:34 AM


indeed...good thoughts here


A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2005-06-09 04:41 AM


People are like little ants moving throughout life....ants and humans never stop moving, working etc....they are always working and never resting...busy.. busy... busy....

A simple life..is best...take time to smell the ROSEs....

~Love and Hugs
~ARH


"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

Goldenrose
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3 posted 2005-06-09 04:44 AM


Dixie thank you for the reply...

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2005-06-09 04:48 AM


ARH..you have the mot juste of what i am trying to say...but ants are organised as one.working for the common good of all...each working collectively...humans are not like ants...ants dont have money to corrupt their world...

Goldenrose.


Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-06-09 08:38 AM



Greetings, Phil!

Some wise advice you have for your readers this morning!


Linda

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6 posted 2005-06-09 10:42 AM


one of my all time favorite sayings,
the best things in life, are truly the simple things...

I enjoyed your perspective on life rushing by way to quickly...

yes....stop
and smell the roses...

a beautiful write m'friend.  

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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